I think I'm growing delirious.
I can remember
That moments never die
When I notice a small smile
Blossoming on your lips
Because then, for a moment
I can forget.
About Me
- AKM
- This blog is a creative outlet whose overarching purpose has varied over the years. While once I had pretensions of fictional writing, nowadays I'm content with studying events and moments in my life that (I hope) mean more than they let on.
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7 comments:
I think you're wonderful :)
may I print this one out? *adores this one*
"I think you're wonderful :)"
Hmm after much consideration, I think so too.
You adore this? But why? What does it mean?
See how much jenny adores you?
I adore it because it's very muchly a really beautiful poem :)
hmm, also the first and last lines are really interesting.. if an oxymoron can be a poem, then your poem is quite oxymoronic. :)
plus small smile blossoming on your lips has a really nice way of emphasising the mood of the poem through it's assonance of the 's' sound.
I've wrote another poem for you when I saw that, but I'm not so sure you'll like it now that you didn't like my previous one that used the same structure as yours T__T
*runs away*
Jenny: Well admittedly it does devalue my writing a bit, but that's ok because there's nothing to value really. It's an interesting topic, why should your usage of my writing's overall style lessen any objective artistic value it has? I think it has more to do with my own dementia.
Ruffian: ...
Aditya,
Just want to tell you that I really like this poem ^_^.
Sleepy cloud
Nancy, I didn't think you actually read this blog! But thanks for the nice comments :) I think this poem is not as bad as some of the other stuff I have written!
How have you been? Still last week of uni isn't it? I'm just sitting here waiting for the holidays to come so that I can board a plane to India ;)
Anyway, take care, and do comment some more!
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